English Project #2

Helo , so the english project episode has been continued

Sooooo , now after I wrote all of that essay, I gave it to my teacher , Ms Tias.
Andddd then taaadaaa I got 97 for my essay. Not really bad. She said that my idea's flow is good. Although I think it's not good at all. I dont know

Then I typed it and then print that unimportant thing ==
Since it doesnt really matter , I dont correct many things , I dont really care actually


BUT BUT BUT after I read it again , it just so sucks,  my language is just not match with the situation that I want to make. AND I really feel like I'm so stupid . My friend, Sammy said that my essay overall is not really bad , like the grammar , and the idea. But how I describe it is the only thing that matter. It's just not the way it should be. It's not deep enough , * Ive alr known that .And she said , it wont be so hard to be understood by even a kindergarten child, which deeply enough to torn my heart . Damn actually it's not that bad , I mean yeah I know my essay is not really good , so I can take it easy , and every critisms are good for our future. SO I just hope I can make myself better or anything

Andd sorry if my post is not in really good language , since I still try to and again
Bye